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Rosa has a key

Maria was fine. What changed is that everyone knew by ten in the morning.

Emily calls. No answer. So she calls Rosa, next door, who has had a key for nineteen years. Rosa walks over. Maria is at the clinic for a flu shot. Her phone is on the kitchen counter, where she left it.

Not an emergency. A Tuesday.

Two houses side by side in late-morning light with a path between them, and Rosa mid-step on the path. Her messages float to one side: Maria is not home, her car is gone, and it is probably the flu-shot appointment — then, later, that she is back and sends her love. Three small portraits of Emily, Rosa and Daniel sit low in the frame, Daniel furthest away.

Rosa WhitfieldEm — she’s not home, car’sgone. Phone’s on the counter.I bet you anything it’s thatflu shot appointment.I’ll sit tight a bit.9:58 AMRosa WhitfieldShe’s back. Sends her love andsays stop fussing. 🌼10:31 AMKinloopMaria answered at 10:31 AM.She’s okay.EmilyKnew at 9:15 AM. Called at9:20.RosaKnew at 9:22 AM. Walkedover at 9:40.DanielIn Chicago. Emily calledhim at 10:33, before he’dhave thought to worry.

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