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The tomatoes came in

The call stopped being a check and went back to being a conversation.

It’s August. Emily still calls. Earlier now — around seven, while she’s making dinner. Last night they talked for thirty-one minutes about tomatoes. Not once about whether Maria was okay.

Maria’s garden in golden late-afternoon light, seen from the back porch through a warm haze. Two small figures stand at a distance among the vines, facing away. A bowl of tomatoes sits on the porch step, and the wall clock from the first chapter appears once more, reading seven o’clock.

Kinloop didn’t make Maria safer.Maria was always mostly fine.It gave Emily her mother back —instead of a person she had toworry about.

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